Wednesday, June 18, 2014

Here are Some Interesting categories........ By Jenslie

What is your favorite kite style? My favorites are the hang glider looking types. Wait........ a hang glider kite is the only thing Mrs. Grate didn't put that on the paper with the kite pictures. YES! EXTRA CREDIT TIME! they're my favorite because to me it looks big enough to make something in the kite. That would be a nice type of kite that would have enough space for a picture or something that shows what is on your kite. If my team and I were to work on a hang glider kite, I would've known what I would like to do. DO YOU IMAGINE THAT WE WOULD'VE MADE A HANG GLIDER KITE AND GET ON IT AND START FLYING AROUND SHOWING EVERYBODY YOUR KITE! Yea,  you do. What?- A student could dream.

 

3 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading your post but when you said " the only thing Mrs. Grate didn't put that on the paper with the kite pictures". i did not really un derstand that sentence. Also on the other hand you had to capitalize I because you are talking about your self.

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  2. You expressed yourself a lot! You even made me laugh when you said the thing a bout extra credit. I just think that you should improve on giving more vocabulary.

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  3. Try not to express yourself to much and leave all the details and facts out just slow down and read over a little

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