Time For Something Creative................Melissa's kite styles
Do you like different kite styles because guess what, I like different kinds of kite styles. Kites can be creative, less creative, beautiful, and not so beautiful. What I want to see in a kite is something that no one has never seen before. Like Mrs. grate says, which is that building a creative kite is an exciting kite not a boring kite. I know that I don't want a boring kite, in fact that's one of my team's goals, which is to have the most creative, and beautiful kite. Due to our determination as a team, that won't be a hard goal to achieve for us girls. You know about diamond kites, right, well that is one of the kites that we do not want to have because that's too boring. How about a kite that's not a shape for once, because I know that you're tired of the diamond kites or the square kites, or the box kites. Well be amazed when our kite is not a shape,because another word for those kites are boring. And that is not a word that people will use to identify our kite, I know that for sure. Well, I guess that's it, that reading took my breathe away, literally.
When I was reading your post i did not under stand the part when you said" I like different kinds of kite styles, Kites can be creative, less creative, beautiful, and not so beautiful. I did not really understand the part when had said that. what do you mean not having your kite look so beautiful. wont you want your kite to look nice?
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a good blog but you need to improve on grammar . My advice to you is that you should read it out loud when your done and when your about to publish it. Work on that it will help !!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you extremely had the pictures of the kites with your blog post nice job !
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